Wednesday, 20 May 2015
Monday, 18 May 2015
Skateboard Design
In Reading we read a story called A Tyreful of Air. It was about John Dunlop
who invented the first tyre with air inside it. This is my design to make
a skateboard better.
Tuesday, 12 May 2015
Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space
This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence. Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milkyway. has he floats out to the glare he look at the stars the stars are shining.Then he walks around and he see a plaint it looks pink the he go to the plaint.
When he went to the plaint he saw something strange he did know what it was he went to see what it was it was like a poisonous potion it was big he went to the poisonous potion and he look at it .Then he heard voices then he slowly went out to his spaceship
Then he went for a machine to find out what happening then he went to see what they are.They were green aliens. They were small aliens but they had weapons.
They can shot but lackey he put some weapons but they herd a boy voices in the spaceship.He made his way back to his spaceship to go and get his weapons.
He waited for a whole then he sol same aliens come to find him but he hide away then he thought why do i have to hurt them so he slowly went to earth.
Tuesday, 28 April 2015
ANZAC Assembly
On Friday we had Assembly we talk about ANZAC and war 1 then we talk about Maori`s. On war 1 there were 8000 people went on the ship they thought that they were going on a trip but no they were going to the war.
They died for us and to save the county we were lucky.I
Have you been to a ANZAC Assembly at your school? have it was cool we talk about lots of thing like the about the war.
Me and my friend were talking about the war.Do you know if war 2 is done?Thing its done but my friend thinks that war 2 aset prast but it has prast.
Then we waited for a well then we went outside we had to be quiet for 1min the we talk about the bots the the army went on.
Thursday, 23 April 2015
Wednesday, 22 April 2015
my holiday
Have you been to Rotorua?On saturday me and my family went to Rotorua on the manner bus we went to Rotorua to say hi to them.We played games like tag netball and lots of games. There were cool games. we went to this big field.Then we had to go to Hametin.
When we went to Hamilton.I was happy! because my dad lives in Hamilton we sad there for 2day we arrived (at 7pm or 6pm) at nirt time it was dark as I went to sleep on the bus do know why I went to Hamilton?Because there was a wedding it was my aunt's wedding it was so cool.
Then I went home just for 2 days because my Nan passed away it was sad I cried when I heard she passed away we went to moon2 I went with my family we had the tagey day there were yummy food.Taamai,Waylan and me went home but not my big Brothers.
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Mrs Jacobsen,
Room 10.,
Te Aumihi,
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